Mushy times…

Shrug into your pullover
and walk me down the road,
the night is dark and light
and even the shops are silent.
It is as if god held the night
by the barrel of his ancient gun
and asked her to organize this world
for an uncommunicative couple
lost in their love.

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Posted on November 4, 2005, in Uncategorized. Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. oh wow, you outdo your self there!

    and the world seems a pretty place
    beheld through eyes tinged with love…

  2. Taaliyan! You be brilliant!

    There are some dissonances : the image of god having to force shut the otherwise cackling shops is one…”even the shops are silent” is the other. Don’t ask me why, though. :))

  3. hmm ……

    the fatalist succumbs ….. willing this time I see

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